Flash Fiction from the Saturday Shed.
Nothing seemed amiss until the eyes started following him around the room: literally, not figuratively. They bounced along on squidgy bits of flesh, which he guessed was the optical nerve. Keith tried to shoo them away, but they jumped around his feet like playful puppies. He gave up and left the art gallery, trying to ignore the slip-slap-slop noises behind him.
A further surprise awaited him in the corridor: it stretched on into infinity. But this was his grandmother’s house: a tiny, two-bed semi-detached. Which, Keith remembered, was demolished years ago. He checked his watch once, then twice. Yup, four thirty-five and then a picture of Mickey Mouse. He stared at the wall, closed his eyes, and opened them. The wallpaper hadn’t changed, but the wall had gone.
He forced himself to remain calm. Last night, he got so excited he woke with a start and fell out of bed. But this time, he controlled his breathing and thought about flying. A delicious feeling of weightlessness enveloped him, and he floated up to the ceiling. Using the picture rail as an anchor, he air-swam into the kitchen, only to find himself in front of the bandstand in the park at the bottom of his road.
“Coo-ee!” Came a female voice. “Over here.”
He looked around, and his heart sank. It was his next-door neighbour. He fluttered over and sat in a deck chair.
“Isn’t this nice?” She pointed at the bandstand where Jimi Hendrix was playing: The trumpet.
“What are you doing in my dream?” said Keith.
“How do you know you’re not in mine?” Marge nudged him in the ribs.
“Shut up, will you?” Jimi shouted. “I want to watch the snow.”
A blizzard hit them, blowing Keith and the deckchair into the side of the Albert Hall. The next thing he knew, he was lying on his bedroom floor, gasping for breath.
“Bugger,” he said after a few minutes. “Just when I was doing so well.” But he perked up when he realised he was lying on a sandbank. Everything else in his bedroom looked right, except the carpet, which was no longer a mottled green shagpile. He crawled to the wardrobe and stumbled into a ballroom complete with a full orchestra, a glitter ball, and hundreds of couples whirling around. Keith wound his way through them, heading to a door he could see on the other side of the room. It was one of many, but this one had two disembodied eyes hopping up and down in front of it. He swore he heard them squeaking.
“Hi, guys,” he said with genuine pleasure. “What have you got for me?”
They leapt up, landed on the handle, and swung the door open.
“This is more like it!” Keith stepped out onto a tropical beach paradise. Just ahead was a sun lounger with a woman lying on it. She took off her sunglasses.
“Jacey!” He ran towards her.
“Keith!” She cupped his face in her hands. “I love you, my darling.” She pulled him close for a kiss, and he melted into her embrace. The fleeting moment of joy evaporated when he realised he was snogging his pillow. No need to check this time; he knew he was awake. With a sigh, he climbed out of bed, noting the return of the carpet, and shuffled into his slippers. After breakfast, he drove up to the hospital. The situation was unchanged: she still lay in her coma, but he sat next to her bed and held her hand.
“Thank you, Jacey,” he whispered in her ear. “Maybe I can make it last longer tonight.”
The doctors warned him not to be fooled by involuntary muscle spasms, but the gentle squeezing of his fingers brought a rare smile to his face.